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67443 2008 年 04 月 16 日 20:44 Reading (loading. ..) Comments (4) Category: Personal Diary
Students sentence
1. Title: children while ...... ......
side: the side off his clothes, while wearing trousers.
Teacher comments: he in the end is to de-ah? or wear ah?
2. Topic: One
children: one of my left foot hurt.
Teacher comments: You are centipede you
3. Title:
after another child: from work,
la gear mens shoes, my father's home after another.
Teacher comments: in the end you have several father ah
4. Title: sad
children: a bar ditch in front of my home very sad.
Teacher comments: the teacher is more upset
5. Topic: Also another
children: my mother was short and tall,
la gear sale, fat and thin.
Teacher comments: Your mother is a deformation of magic you
6. Topic: Do you see
kids: What you looking at,
la gears! never seen ah?
teacher reviews: Do not get pulled
7. Title: thriving
children write: thriving Wing confession.
Comments: Do not read too much drama!
8. Title: delicious
children write: delicious ass.
teacher :.........
9. Title: The innocent children
wrote: really hot today.
Comments: You're naive
10. Title: indeed
kids said: Yesterday I ate fruit. then Liangshui
Comments: is the phrase,
la gear sneakers, not separate
11. Title: The first ...... then ...... Example: eat first, then take a bath.
children: Sir,
la gear, good-bye,
la lights!
teacher reviews :.................
12. Topic: What is
children: a train After Moreover Moreover Moreover Moreover
Teacher comments: I have to die